Originally the "Thoomp" from the last page would have been her internal organs pouring out of her body cavity because when she outgrew her house she got wounds from the debris which opened up wider when she laughed, but I decided against it.
But the sound of a sudden increase in bust size is fine too.
You know what else is absurd? I did three of these pages today. I'm worn out.
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